Today I finished all of fall examination(>u<)!
Spring vacation will be start tomorrow.
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Jan 31, 2008
Jan 30, 2008
TASK 2 *suggestion*
To complete your homework is need to enjoy making your own blog. Blog may not be familiar with our life, first you may be embarrassed what blog is!?
But if you enjoy your blog, it could be one of your favorite hobbies. Blog is need for Writing 3c class, so paste information on your blog and improve to use easier. I pasted Writing 3c blog and homepage, cooking blog, mixi, face book, and friend's blogs.
If you start your blog, please enjoy it. It's a good chance you to improve your English skills.
Finally I suggest you 3 steps to achieve your blog. First, you write anything anyway. By writing your self it gets words that you need to express what you think.
Second you don't forgot save your draft of post. If you save your draft in your blog, the date remain you save the day whether you finished your completed draft and post it.
Third step is to enjoy your blog. It is the best way to improve your skills and pass the Writing 3c class. I wish you like blogs.
But if you enjoy your blog, it could be one of your favorite hobbies. Blog is need for Writing 3c class, so paste information on your blog and improve to use easier. I pasted Writing 3c blog and homepage, cooking blog, mixi, face book, and friend's blogs.
If you start your blog, please enjoy it. It's a good chance you to improve your English skills.
Finally I suggest you 3 steps to achieve your blog. First, you write anything anyway. By writing your self it gets words that you need to express what you think.
Second you don't forgot save your draft of post. If you save your draft in your blog, the date remain you save the day whether you finished your completed draft and post it.
Third step is to enjoy your blog. It is the best way to improve your skills and pass the Writing 3c class. I wish you like blogs.
(183 words)
TASK 0
portfolio-based exams on January 30, 2008.
Please note that "/" means "divided by", and "*" means "multiplied by".
Jan 9, 2008
Portfolios- due January 14, 2008
beginning of template [copy from here] /////
Student ID: 06145
(last five digits of
your student no.)
(last five digits of
your student no.)
Writing IVc: Portfolio
(See: Note 1, below)
(See: Note 1, below)
0.0. Overview
Reviews, Posts, and Words
(See: Note 2, below.) | Months | 08 | 09 | 10 | 11 | 12 | 01 | Totals | fn | Indices |
| Book reviews | 0 | 0 | 6 | 5 | 7 | 18 | total/18*2 | ||
| Blog posts | 24 | 27 | 34 | 39 | 26 | 150 | total/150*2 | ||
| Words | 2660 | 1782 | 4618 | 4644 | 3921 | 17625 | total/17625*2 | ||
| TOTAL | --- | --- | --- | --- | --- | --- | --- | --- |
1.0. Essays
(See: Note 3, below) | 1.1. Showcase | Short titles [+ links] | Dates (yy.mm.dd) | ¶ | W | C | L | P | M | Notes |
| Mega- essay 07.10.12 | Capital of light Kumamoto | Oct.10.2007 | 17 | 1044 | 2 | 14 | 15 | 0 | |
| Favorite place(-s) 07.10.26 | My favorite place | Oct.26.2007 | 4 | 170 | 1 | 0 | 0 | 0 | |
| Movie review 07.11.11 | From Woody | Nov.07.2007 | 7 | 295 | 2 | 1 | 1 | 0 | |
| Community life 07.11.25 | Essay☆Community life | Nov.12.2007 | 8 | 480 | 0 | 0 | 0 | 0 | |
| TV in Japan 07.12.09 | Commercial | Dec.07.2007 | 6 | 316 | 0 | 0 | 0 | 0 | |
| Learning w/ computers 07.12.21 | Leaning with computer | Dec.12.2007 | 5 | 288 | 2 | 2 | 0 | 0 | |
| Totals | --- | --- | 47 | 2593 | 7 | 17 | 16 | 0 | --- |
Key:
¶: number of paragraphs three or more sentences in length
W: number of words
C: number of comments
L: number of links
P: number of photos or other graphics
M: number of other media included
M: number of other media included
1.2. Best Essay
Selection and Assessment: Which of those essays do you feel is the best that you've written this semester, and why? Please remember that a complete answer is better than a short answer, and give at least two reasons to support your assessment.- [Capital of light Kumamoto] Its need so much time to finish the essay. I kept on improving my grammar and sentences that people can know Kumamoto by short sentences. I have a confidence our Kumamoto essay is the best essay in Kumamo essay in our class.
2.0. Comments
Showcase | Titles of posts with links | Dates of comments (yy.mm.dd) | Numbers of words in comments | Qualities of comments** |
| 2.1. Your first comment on your instructor's blog* | Demographics | Dec.12.2007 | 35 | So so. |
| 2.2. Your best comment on a classmate's blog* | My enjoyment of winter season | Nov.18.2007 | 45 | Good. |
| 2.3. Best comment by a classmate on your blog* | Kumi house | Nov.22.2007 | 79 | Good. Long comment. |
| 2.4. Most comments on: | Titles of posts with link | Dates of posts (yy.mm.dd) | Total number of words in comments | Qualities of comments* |
| 2.4.1. Any one of your essays* | Essay ☆ Community life | Nov.14.2007 | 122 | Good. They evaluated me. |
| 2.4.1.1. When did you respond to those comments? | --- | Jan.16.2008 | --- | --- |
| 2.4.1.2. How did you respond to those comments? | --- | --- | 89 | Good. |
| 2.4.2. Any of your other posts* | Mega Essay Outline (Mega Essay) | Oct.03.2007 | 256 | Nice. |
| 2.4.2.1. When did you respond to those comments? | --- | Jan.16.2008 | --- | --- |
| 2.4.2.2. How did you respond to those comments? | --- | --- | 121 | Good. |
* Current semester comments on essays and other posts
** Please list the most important qualities of comments on each type of blog post.
2.5. Recent comments display
Does your blog display recent comments from blog visitors in a prominent location, for example in a sidebar, header, or footer widget? Where or why not?- ... I added comments display in a sidebar on my blog.
2.6. Additional reflections on comments
- I have to write more words and respond comments faster.
3.0. Typing Speed Trials
| Showcase | Numbers of words | Dates (yy.mm.dd) |
| 3.1. Worst typing speed trial* | 102 | Oct.10.2007 |
| 3.2. Best typing speed trial* | 157 | Nov.14.2007 |
| 3.3. Improvement (best minus worst) | 55 | --- |
| 3.4. Average speed for three (3) most recent speed trials** | 146 | since Nov.07.2007 to Nov.21.2007 |
* Current semester typing speed trials (five minutes)
** Please list all three dates.
4.0. Book Reviews
| 4.1. Showcase | Short titles with links | Dates (yy.mm.dd) | Words | Comments |
| Example: | Vampire Killer | 07.05.16 | 39 | 1 |
| 2-01 | The Teacher's Secret | 07.10.02 | 127 | 0 |
| 2-02 | Tales from Longpuddle | 07.10.02 | 114 | 0 |
| 2-03 | RETURN TO EARTH | 07.10.02 | 408 | 0 |
| 2-04 | Karen and the ARTIST | 07.10.15 | 194 | 0 |
| 2-05 | NELSON MANDELA | 07.10.26 | 94 | 0 |
| 2-06 | another world | 07.10.26 | 253 | 0 |
| 2-07 | A Trip to the Zoo | 07.11.15 | 107 | 0 |
| 2-08 | Bugs! Bugs! Bugs! | 07.11.15 | 95 | 0 |
| 2-09 | U.F.O.S | 07.11.15 | 98 | 0 |
| 2-10 | SIX Sketches | 07.11.22 | 164 | 0 |
| 2-11 | Fishy Tales | 07.11.28 | 126 | 0 |
| 2-12 | ROBIN HOOD | 07.12.02 | 320 | 0 |
| 2-13 | Animal Hostital | 07.12.02 | 97 | 0 |
| 2-14 | GIRL against the JUNGLE | 07.12.07 | 329 | 0 |
| 2-15 | THE FIFTEENTH CHARACTER | 07.12.13 | 328 | 0 |
| 2-16 | Ali and his CAMERA | 07.12.18 | 319 | 0 |
| 2-17 | HAMLET | 07.12.17 | 116 | 1 |
| 2-18 | DEAD MAN'S RIVER | 07.12.21 | 329 | 0 |
| --- | --- | TOTALS: | 3618 | 0 |
4.2. Best Book Review
Selection and Assessment: Which of those book reviews do you feel is the best that you've written this semester, and why? Please remember that a complete answer is better than a short answer, and give at least two reasons to support your assessment.- [Remove square brackets, including these remarks; identify your best book review, and write out reasons for selecting it here.]
5.0. Blog Layout, Labeling, Linking, & Media
| Showcase | Yes | No |
| 5.1. Does your blog have an archive? | ○ | |
| 5.1.1. Does the archive display the titles of posts? | ○ | |
| 5.1.2. Is the archive organized by month? | ○ | |
| 5.1.3. Is the archive at or near the top of the sidebar? | ○ | |
| 5.2. Does your blog have labels displayed in sidebar? | ○ | |
| 5.2.1. Do your labels include these required labels (typed accurately): | --- | --- |
| ○ | |
| ○ | |
| ○ | |
| ○ | |
| ○ | |
| 5.2.2. Does your sidebar display other labels? | ○ | |
| --- | --- |
| --- | --- |
| 5.3. Links & media | --- | --- |
| 5.3.1. Does your blog include pictures or other graphics? | ○ | |
| ○ | |
| --- | --- |
| 5.3.2. Does your blog include posts with multiple links? | ○ | |
| --- | --- |
| 5.3.3. Does your blog include other media? | ○ | |
| --- | --- |
| --- | --- |
5.4. Overall presentation
What have you done to enhance the overall presentation of your blog? List and explain the three most important content, formatting, layout, or other presentation changes or enhancements that you have made on your blog this semester.- ...I often used meny pictures for enjoy viewing my blog from people. It made a little pleasure for me.
- ...I keep on correcting my grammer and vocabulary. What I need grammer or vocabulary is very important for me to explain my feelin on my blog. It will change good skill for writing.
- ...I have posted on my blog much more than spring semester. It got over 200 post in total and it is near 250 posts. It was a good incentive to make my own blog. I like posting.
6.0. Additional reflections on your blog writing
- ...I have to respond comments faster. I could respond them faster in spring semester than fall semester.
7.0. Suggestions for your peers and successors
- ...Make more posts and enjoy your blog.
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Notes:
- This portfolio template amplifies the template for Writing IIIc portfolios.
- The overview section (0.0. Overview, above) derives from Proto-Portfolio 2-01.
- This essays section (1.0. Essays, above) derives from Proto-Portfolio 2-02.
Dec 21, 2007
Book Review 2-18 ☆ DEAD MAN'S RIVER
One day, a man Jonas went to bank to see and make a proposal to his girl friend. The girl friend is Hetty. He said her "I love you. Marry me."
Hetty looks like embarrassing.
Mr. Gray came out of his office and said Jonas.
"Oh, Jonas! My daughter is not for you. She can't marry a poor man. Go away and get some money."
Jonas was sad and sit down in the bar. Old Harry was sitting near Jonas, Old Harry had a
bag of gold. He quarreled with two men. Bernie and Pete asked Old Harry "Where does this gold come from?". He answered "It's from Dead Man's River". Pete was surprised because it is possible to appear ghosts in Dead Man's River.
Then two men and Old Harry started to go there.Jonas stalked them and tried to find any gold. When they arrived there, they started to find gold in the river. Take sands and wash it.
Jonas was detected by Bernie. Bernie is a tall man. Jonas thinks maybe he has a gun...
He ran away from Bernie. The sun is going down. Jonas heard the voice "Help!".
There is Old Harry behind the rock. His leg is bad so he wants to help running away from two men.
Old Harry told him yo secret where he found gold. Old Harry has some other gold bags. Then two men came near them. Jonas puts his shirt on his head and disguised a ghost.
It was night and moon was bright.
It was succeed to disguise a ghost. Two men were very surprised and ran away quickly. Old Harry and Jonas laughed and laughed.
Old Harry gave 2 gold bags to Harry in honor of being good friends.
The next day, Jonas tried to propose Hetty again. Then Mr Gray appeared but he has a nerve any more.
He showed two gold bags to Hetty's father Mr Gray.
Finally Mr Gray accepted and celebrated the marriage.
Hetty looks like embarrassing.
Mr. Gray came out of his office and said Jonas.
"Oh, Jonas! My daughter is not for you. She can't marry a poor man. Go away and get some money."
Jonas was sad and sit down in the bar. Old Harry was sitting near Jonas, Old Harry had abag of gold. He quarreled with two men. Bernie and Pete asked Old Harry "Where does this gold come from?". He answered "It's from Dead Man's River". Pete was surprised because it is possible to appear ghosts in Dead Man's River.
Then two men and Old Harry started to go there.Jonas stalked them and tried to find any gold. When they arrived there, they started to find gold in the river. Take sands and wash it.
Jonas was detected by Bernie. Bernie is a tall man. Jonas thinks maybe he has a gun...
He ran away from Bernie. The sun is going down. Jonas heard the voice "Help!".
There is Old Harry behind the rock. His leg is bad so he wants to help running away from two men.
Old Harry told him yo secret where he found gold. Old Harry has some other gold bags. Then two men came near them. Jonas puts his shirt on his head and disguised a ghost.
It was night and moon was bright.
It was succeed to disguise a ghost. Two men were very surprised and ran away quickly. Old Harry and Jonas laughed and laughed.
Old Harry gave 2 gold bags to Harry in honor of being good friends.
The next day, Jonas tried to propose Hetty again. Then Mr Gray appeared but he has a nerve any more.
He showed two gold bags to Hetty's father Mr Gray.
Finally Mr Gray accepted and celebrated the marriage.
(329 words)
Dec 18, 2007
Book Review 2-17 ☆ HAMLET
I read "HAMLET" this is a very famous story. Hamlet is written by Shakespeare.

This book is easy to read because they have many pictures and constructed like a magazine.
One day two guards see a ghost at the Elsinore Castle. The ghost is the old king who is already dead.
When the old king's son Hamlet met the ghost, the ghost spoke to him.
He told the truth"I was killed by his brother Claudius."
Claudius is a king and the queen is Hamlet's mother. Hamlet's mother married next king!
Hamlet tried to investigate the truth.
He suspected his girl friend and his friends. He wondered there is any reason that he lives at that time.

This book is easy to read because they have many pictures and constructed like a magazine.
One day two guards see a ghost at the Elsinore Castle. The ghost is the old king who is already dead.
When the old king's son Hamlet met the ghost, the ghost spoke to him.
He told the truth"I was killed by his brother Claudius."
Claudius is a king and the queen is Hamlet's mother. Hamlet's mother married next king!
Hamlet tried to investigate the truth.
He suspected his girl friend and his friends. He wondered there is any reason that he lives at that time.
(116 words)
Book Review 2-16 ☆ Ali and his CAMERA

I read "Ali and his CAMERA". This is a story about a way to get his camera.
He and his family are poor. He has been wanted to get his own camera. He always takes pictures in his mind. He corrects his photograph in his mind.
One day, he saw an old lady at market. He helped carring her heavy bag to her house. He took picture at the stature near her house.
An old lady invited to her house and gave him an old camera. Her son had the camera before but he doesn't need the camera any more. He had many other new cameras.
So Ali was given a camera from the old lady. He can't say and forgot how to say "Thank you".
He got new camera but he doesn't have films to take pictures. He worked very hard to buy some films and got it! First picture he got films, he took a picture of the old lady who gave his a camera and her son.
He showed his picture to her son. Her son works at news paper company now. He said to Ali "Your pictures are not so bad. You need to learn more about photography". Ali was very surprised, "Not so bad!?".
Ali asked him "Why his picture is not so bad".
He answered "Some of your pictures are good, some of your pictures are not so bad.". Ali got anger and got out the room quickly.
He told the story what happened in the day to his mother.
His mother told him you're wrong. He studied about camera in the photo shop. The owner teaches him about camera.
He tried to show his pictures Old lady's son. One day the camera shop's owner showed him a newspaper. There is a picture that Ali took! He is very surprised to see that. The newspaper company is worked by the Old lady's son.
(319 words)
Dec 13, 2007
Book Review 2-15 ☆ THE FIFTENNTH CHARACTER
Sally Brown is a student to be a teacher. She works at Happy Hills that is an amusement park in her holidays. The workers usually work making tea or helping in the children's house or wearing the costumes. Happy Hill has 15 characters. The day Sally had to wear the most tired character. She had to be "Conny Cat". Conny Cat can only say miaow to the children.
Her co- worker William said her "Zapp's coming today".
Zapp is a famous singer. Sally loves listening to his songs and she has all his CD.
She really wants to meet him, but she tried to do only her job: being Conny Cat.
Zapp sang some songs and everyone sang songs too.
At last Zapp show a CD that is recorded new song. TV show man asked him to please sing the song. But Zapp smiled and said. "No. no you must come to my bug concert next Saturday."
He only did advertisement of his next concert.
After that Zapp enjoyed Happy Hills. Shaking hands with fan and taking pictures with Happy Hill's characters.
When Sally started to rest canteen, suddenly Mr Parry, a boss and a lot of people come into the canteen.
They are looking for Zapp's CD that recorded new song. Zapp is very anger and call police to find his CD.
All the visitors and workers are asked and checked their pocket.
But it's difficult to find CD.
But Sally noticed the Jobs list. Today there are fourteen characters on the list. But there are fifteen characters here. She reads the list again.
Finally she found unexpected character! Police asked the character who are you. The woman who wears costume began to run away.
But police caught her. She has Zapp's CD. The singer smiles again.
The other day (next Saturday) Sally and William are in London because they are going to Zapp's concert. They don't have any ticket but they have invitation ticket from Zapp.
Her co- worker William said her "Zapp's coming today".
Zapp is a famous singer. Sally loves listening to his songs and she has all his CD.She really wants to meet him, but she tried to do only her job: being Conny Cat.
Zapp sang some songs and everyone sang songs too.
At last Zapp show a CD that is recorded new song. TV show man asked him to please sing the song. But Zapp smiled and said. "No. no you must come to my bug concert next Saturday."
He only did advertisement of his next concert.
After that Zapp enjoyed Happy Hills. Shaking hands with fan and taking pictures with Happy Hill's characters.
When Sally started to rest canteen, suddenly Mr Parry, a boss and a lot of people come into the canteen.
They are looking for Zapp's CD that recorded new song. Zapp is very anger and call police to find his CD.
All the visitors and workers are asked and checked their pocket.
But it's difficult to find CD.
But Sally noticed the Jobs list. Today there are fourteen characters on the list. But there are fifteen characters here. She reads the list again.
Finally she found unexpected character! Police asked the character who are you. The woman who wears costume began to run away.
But police caught her. She has Zapp's CD. The singer smiles again.
The other day (next Saturday) Sally and William are in London because they are going to Zapp's concert. They don't have any ticket but they have invitation ticket from Zapp.
(328 words)
Dec 7, 2007
Comercial
Introduction
Today we live in the useful society that we can watch TV and get the new information every time. We can watch TV programs and commercial film by not only TV but also cell phone. Let me exam commercial. I will show you about Japanese commercials.
Body
CM history
CM is started at August 28, 1953. The Seiko Company started to inform the time signal of noon and recommending to maintenance of our clocks. The company tried to impress the existence of clock in our daily life. Commercial is divided 2 types those are time commercial and spot commercial. Commercial that on air time is decided. That depends on the time of TV program. But first commercial failed because they mistook both sides of the film! The commercial is aired only 3 second!
Now December 18th is provided the day "The day for commercial".
Technique
They often use cutting-edge technologies like a CG or design or character. The companies competed what is the most impressive commercial for us. They want us to communicate their aim by making CM. They could use any technique, but they have to care whether invade human being.
Reflection by CM
Sometimes commercials make a trend. They made vogue-words or fashion. It reflects great in our society and life. If companies adopt famous star, people want to watch it regardless of the contents. But it is important thing for star to what images people feel by watching commercial. It could sometimes decide their image. Commercial is great chance for star to remember by people.
Conclusion
Today we live in the useful society that we can watch TV and get the new information every time. We can watch TV programs and commercial film by not only TV but also cell phone. Let me exam commercial. I will show you about Japanese commercials.
Body
CM history
CM is started at August 28, 1953. The Seiko Company started to inform the time signal of noon and recommending to maintenance of our clocks. The company tried to impress the existence of clock in our daily life. Commercial is divided 2 types those are time commercial and spot commercial. Commercial that on air time is decided. That depends on the time of TV program. But first commercial failed because they mistook both sides of the film! The commercial is aired only 3 second!
Now December 18th is provided the day "The day for commercial".
Technique
They often use cutting-edge technologies like a CG or design or character. The companies competed what is the most impressive commercial for us. They want us to communicate their aim by making CM. They could use any technique, but they have to care whether invade human being.
Reflection by CM
Sometimes commercials make a trend. They made vogue-words or fashion. It reflects great in our society and life. If companies adopt famous star, people want to watch it regardless of the contents. But it is important thing for star to what images people feel by watching commercial. It could sometimes decide their image. Commercial is great chance for star to remember by people.
Conclusion
We can watch vommercial between TV programs. It give us a new information and some feelings. We can enjoy or excite or sad through the commercial. It's a short time but it reflects our mind. Commercial has many aims, for example to recommend products or inform us some information and to warn to our heart.
(316 words)Dec 2, 2007
Book Review 2-13 ☆ Animal Hospital

I read "Animal Hospital". This is a story around 2 boys. They are brothers. One day, they found a injured goose. It looks like very painful. They call their father and he took the goose to animal hospital. The 2 boys watched what the bet say about the goose.
They sometimes came and see the goose.
The bed mended the crach of the born.
They are sometimes see to the goose and they and their mother go to return the goose to nature.
The place is a farm. If they want, they can meet the goose again.
(97 words)
Nov 22, 2007
Book Review 2-10 ☆SIX Sketches

I read "SIX Sketches".
This book is constructed 6 short stories. All of the stories have the point of the joke.
When I found this book, I thought it maybe love story...because the man looks like a bridegroom.
But it was not love story.
I recommend one of the stories is "Cheese". This story is very funny.
Mr. Smith who works at a shop is very cute! One day, he is said by the young man who buys a cheese every day.
The young man said
"I buy a cheese from you every day. But I don't like cheese and eat cheese. Do you know why I buy cheese every day?"
Mr. Smith is thinking that answer. But he doesn't have the answer.
The young man told the answer to him.
After that he always said to customers "Cheese!".
Customers felt strange. But he still keeps to saying "Cheese".
Why he told customers to "Cheese" is a secret (*>v<*) Please let read the book!
(164 words)
Nov 15, 2007
Book Review 2-9 ☆ U.F.O.S

I read "U.F.O.s".
This book is divided some parts.
Those sections are some stories who saw the UFOs and what government said about UFOs and aliens and doubts for pictures of UFOs.
This is a kind of mystery. Either UFOs are really exist or not is doubtful, but some of people couldn't believe that existent.
We have some images to aliens.
Those images reflected by movies.
Maybe the main causes are "independence day" and "E.T." and "X-files" and so on. An alien in E.T. is small and very kind alien. But aliens in X files are very frightened.
(98 words)
Book Review 2-8 ☆ Bugs! Bugs! Bugs!

I read "Bugs! Bugs! Bugs!" today.
This book is written bug's particular features.
They have some particular features and abilities. They have features for living. The other aim is easy to live. Some bugs can hide from enemies by changing their body colour and pretending a part of the natures.
Some bugs have a strong body to fight other bugs. One of the most surprised things for me is dragonflies.
They can eat their own body weight in only half of the hour. That's like we eating 250 sandwiches!
.....I can't eat so much (><)
(95 words)
Book Review 2-7 ☆Trip To the Zoo

I read "A trip To the Zoo".
This story is written about a family (2 boys and their mother) goes to the zoo. This is the first time for 2 boys to go to the zoo.
Their mother planed it with surprising.
Two boys are exciting to meet animals not in books. They saw many animals.
Those are elephants and rhinos and giraffes zebras and tigers and gorilla and koalas and wallabies.
This book is used many cute and funny pictures. When I was reading this book, I saw unknown words. Those are clumsy, chomp and staring and nostril and gobbled.
Chomp is a kind of sounds.
(107 words)
Nov 14, 2007
Essay☆Comunity life
Introduction
I belong to and live in some communities now.
All of those communities are essential things for me.
I can divide some most important communities. For example, my friends and part time job and family.
In my community life, I'm growing up gradually. If the community including environment is changed, I will change and adopt the environment.
I live in some community life!
Body
friends
First I belong to friends. I have many friends since I was born. Those were childhood friends or friends in nursery school or friends in each phrase school.
Now I usually stay with my friends at school. Sometimes I stay some one's house. Sometimes we hold the drink party and plan the short trip. We talk and eat with my friends and feel happy.
I like chatting and staying with my friends. Sometimes we fight but we will become good relation ship again soon. To stay with my friends is one of the most important relax ways for me to live in society.
We did stupid things but sometimes we talk about very private and serious things. We grow up together more slightly and more slightly.
family
Next I belong to my family. My family is 5 people and 1 dog. Now I usually stay with my parents and grandmother at house. My young brother lives in far place from my house. He lives in dormitory of his high school. Since he entered high school, my family usually stays our home all the member.
But now we couldn't stay all the time. I have a part time job and school life and relation ship to others. I sometimes play with my friends.
Both of my parents have own works. Only grandmother stayed at home all the time. We seldom eat dinner together, but I like my family and we have a good relation ship.
part time job
Third I have 2 part time jobs. One is cram school and the other is Izakaya. I have been working 2 years at cram school and 1 month at Izakaya. Izakaya job has been just starting. I learn how to reserve customers and how enjoy my Izakaya life. Sometimes customers gave us unexpected feeling. Some of them said to me or us "Thank you, I'll come here again", we feel good or if they feel uncomfortable, we feel and uneasy.
How we enjoy our part time job is depending customer's satisfying. I like my part time job and companion.
It's hard for me to memorize the menu and how behave to customers.
But I could enjoy the busy part time job life because of my companion.
Conclusion
I like and enjoy my community life. I feel something from them and grow up with them. I want not to only be given from community but also change and stimulate the community. I want to become good with my communities.
I belong to and live in some communities now.
All of those communities are essential things for me.
I can divide some most important communities. For example, my friends and part time job and family.
In my community life, I'm growing up gradually. If the community including environment is changed, I will change and adopt the environment.
I live in some community life!
Body
friends
First I belong to friends. I have many friends since I was born. Those were childhood friends or friends in nursery school or friends in each phrase school.
Now I usually stay with my friends at school. Sometimes I stay some one's house. Sometimes we hold the drink party and plan the short trip. We talk and eat with my friends and feel happy.
I like chatting and staying with my friends. Sometimes we fight but we will become good relation ship again soon. To stay with my friends is one of the most important relax ways for me to live in society.
We did stupid things but sometimes we talk about very private and serious things. We grow up together more slightly and more slightly.
family
Next I belong to my family. My family is 5 people and 1 dog. Now I usually stay with my parents and grandmother at house. My young brother lives in far place from my house. He lives in dormitory of his high school. Since he entered high school, my family usually stays our home all the member.
But now we couldn't stay all the time. I have a part time job and school life and relation ship to others. I sometimes play with my friends.
Both of my parents have own works. Only grandmother stayed at home all the time. We seldom eat dinner together, but I like my family and we have a good relation ship.
part time job
Third I have 2 part time jobs. One is cram school and the other is Izakaya. I have been working 2 years at cram school and 1 month at Izakaya. Izakaya job has been just starting. I learn how to reserve customers and how enjoy my Izakaya life. Sometimes customers gave us unexpected feeling. Some of them said to me or us "Thank you, I'll come here again", we feel good or if they feel uncomfortable, we feel and uneasy.
How we enjoy our part time job is depending customer's satisfying. I like my part time job and companion.
It's hard for me to memorize the menu and how behave to customers.
But I could enjoy the busy part time job life because of my companion.
Conclusion
I like and enjoy my community life. I feel something from them and grow up with them. I want not to only be given from community but also change and stimulate the community. I want to become good with my communities.
(480 words)
Nov 7, 2007
Movie Review☆TOY STORY
Toy story is one of the most popular movies in Disney pictures.
I have been watched it maybe twice.
This story is about toys that became not fashionable. The main character is Woody. I will introduce about Woody.
Toy story is used many CG techniques. It is so long CG animation that we seldom watch so long CG animation and it became the animation used CG full time. Pixsa Animation Studio is good animation studio. They provide us fantastic and funny animation movies.
I like Disney movies.
Woody is cowboy toy. He talks when someone pull his strings and he was always Andy's most favorite toy. Andy always played cowboy kid with other toys. That is main character is of course Woody.
But there is a big secret about Andy's toy. That is they are alive same to humans and they could move around when night comes. They not only talk but also play. Woody is the leader of saving the secret. It is fairer secret in toy's world. The secret is toy must not be known by humans to be able to move around!
But one day, new toy are given for Andy. In fact Woody couldn't feel relieved that he may not be the most favorite toy for Andy. The other toys are very glad to meet the new toy.
The new toy is Buzz. He is looked as an astronaut. Buzz has very fashionable items and functions. Andy was envious to Buzz. He tried to vanished from Andy. But the plan was failed. He tried to do that again, but it is always failed.
But Woody's mind is slightly changing. He became to like Buzz and accept he is the most favorite toy for Andy.
Woody and Buzz became a good friend.
I have been watched it maybe twice.
This story is about toys that became not fashionable. The main character is Woody. I will introduce about Woody.
Toy story is used many CG techniques. It is so long CG animation that we seldom watch so long CG animation and it became the animation used CG full time. Pixsa Animation Studio is good animation studio. They provide us fantastic and funny animation movies.
I like Disney movies.
Woody is cowboy toy. He talks when someone pull his strings and he was always Andy's most favorite toy. Andy always played cowboy kid with other toys. That is main character is of course Woody.
But there is a big secret about Andy's toy. That is they are alive same to humans and they could move around when night comes. They not only talk but also play. Woody is the leader of saving the secret. It is fairer secret in toy's world. The secret is toy must not be known by humans to be able to move around!
But one day, new toy are given for Andy. In fact Woody couldn't feel relieved that he may not be the most favorite toy for Andy. The other toys are very glad to meet the new toy.
The new toy is Buzz. He is looked as an astronaut. Buzz has very fashionable items and functions. Andy was envious to Buzz. He tried to vanished from Andy. But the plan was failed. He tried to do that again, but it is always failed.
But Woody's mind is slightly changing. He became to like Buzz and accept he is the most favorite toy for Andy.
Woody and Buzz became a good friend.
(295 words)
Oct 26, 2007
Second Essay Outline
Introduction
I like the place that I can relax. My house is the best house for me.
All my favorite places make me refresh.
My room
I like my room. I arranged my room that I like. My room is very simple design. The light is very cute. I choose the one from 30 kind of lights.
Sofa at living
There is a new sofa in living room. My house has just built since last year. My mother decided to situate a nice sofa. When I got home, I sit down on the sofa and watch the TV. After I have eaten the dinner, I sit down the sofa with my dog.
In front of a computer
I’m keen on using my computer now. When I use Internet, I often listen to the music by sonic player of the computer. I like to see and write a blog. Or I can know any information by using a computer.
Conclusion
I like those places. I like my house is the best.
I like the place that I can relax. My house is the best house for me.
All my favorite places make me refresh.
My room
I like my room. I arranged my room that I like. My room is very simple design. The light is very cute. I choose the one from 30 kind of lights.
Sofa at living
There is a new sofa in living room. My house has just built since last year. My mother decided to situate a nice sofa. When I got home, I sit down on the sofa and watch the TV. After I have eaten the dinner, I sit down the sofa with my dog.
In front of a computer
I’m keen on using my computer now. When I use Internet, I often listen to the music by sonic player of the computer. I like to see and write a blog. Or I can know any information by using a computer.
Conclusion
I like those places. I like my house is the best.
(170 words)
Book review 2-6☆Another World
I read this book. The name is "Another World". This story is about another world that we are living. People who live in another world are very happy. They always sing a song "We are happy. Tomorrow will be a happier day than today". The students go to school are very young and
beautiful. They never seen any adult more that 25 years. If they become 25 years old, they slept in a very long dream forever.
The teacher told them that is other shape of happy.
Students believe it too.
One day, a boy student who is very smart met a girl. He doesn't meet her ever. He felt she is different. I don't know her. She has gray eyes. Other students including the boy student have blue eyes.
He met her at garden in lunch time. The girl talked to her about another world. He felt it's strange. I can't believe there is an another world.
He went to another world with other girl. He showed him homeless and family and busy traffic. He felt uncomfortable to know the new things.
He wants to stay the happy life. He doesn't want free.
He decided to get back to Eden.
After he got beck to Eden, he didn't meet her again.
In fact the girl is the researcher from the central of Eden. He tested him whether he is the best person to enter the center or not.
And he pass the exam and he decided to enter the center of Eden.
beautiful. They never seen any adult more that 25 years. If they become 25 years old, they slept in a very long dream forever.The teacher told them that is other shape of happy.
Students believe it too.
One day, a boy student who is very smart met a girl. He doesn't meet her ever. He felt she is different. I don't know her. She has gray eyes. Other students including the boy student have blue eyes.
He met her at garden in lunch time. The girl talked to her about another world. He felt it's strange. I can't believe there is an another world.
He went to another world with other girl. He showed him homeless and family and busy traffic. He felt uncomfortable to know the new things.
He wants to stay the happy life. He doesn't want free.
He decided to get back to Eden.
After he got beck to Eden, he didn't meet her again.
In fact the girl is the researcher from the central of Eden. He tested him whether he is the best person to enter the center or not.
And he pass the exam and he decided to enter the center of Eden.
(253words)
Book review 2-5☆NELSON MANDELA

I read this book Nelson Mandela.
He is a fist black president in his dearest country.
This book wrote about his life and how to became a president.
He went to other country to become a his hometown's mayor. He studied hard and elected the chair person of changing group.
But he confused, he wanted only to help their movement. He counseled vice mayor in his country.
He became anger and he said to him.
"You should become a mayor. You should!"
So this is one of the his motivation to become a president.
(94 words)
Oct 15, 2007
Book review 2-4☆Karen and the ARTIST

I read the book "Karen and the ARTIST".
This is a story about pictures which is written by the young artist who is not known much by popular.
A woman went to the Roma because of her job. She works as a flight attendant. So she has a free time to see around Roma.
Then she met a man who is very young and poor.
He often goes a bar, and he ordered some food and drinks. He doesn't much money so he gives some pictures to a barman instead of the calculation.
The bar has very full of pictures. The woman Karen is really like those pictures.
She wants to buy those pictures as great works. She tried to sell those pictures all around the world to give some money to young talented artist. She could sell them as very expensive price. She got much money. 1000 pounds and 10000 francs she earned.
The young artist was really happy, but the most joy is her coming back. He wants to stay with her forever. He said her "Don't go away again, and you're going to stay here".
He paints her picture at last.
The young artist was really happy, but the most joy is her coming back. He wants to stay with her forever. He said her "Don't go away again, and you're going to stay here".
He paints her picture at last.
(194 words)
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