NEW LABELS part 2

I added new labels!!
ACCURACY and ASSIGNMENT and LAYOUT, and LINKING'N'LINKS, and PORTFOLIOS , and REVIEWS

4 Ice cream

I like ice cream. Yesterday I ate it 3 times in a day. Their tastes are vanilla and chocolate and apple. First I ate vanilla at my house. vanilla is the most favorite taste.

And I and my mother went to my grandmother’s house in Uto. It was hot day yesterday, so grandmother gave us ice cream. I confused little because I am not good the condition of stomach. But I enjoy eating and

This ice cream I ate at my part time job. My boss gave me as a prize that she thought I could work so hard. It was also good. My tired body is refreshed!!

(108 words)

My house

This is my house. My house build in country.

But there looks very beautiful.

Blue sky, fruitful green glass, smooth mountain.

We can drink water only to turn on the tap.

It's very wonderful. So I have never buy the water.

I love Yamaga city.

SWIMWEAR

I have t0 buy swimwear this year!!

I gave up buying it by the last year.

Because it it so EXPENSIVE!!!!!!!!!!

If I will buy one, I want a cute and colorful one.
But I enjoy selecting the most favorite one.

It is a very grave thing for girls.

Busy Busy BUSY===3

Now I spend busy time.
I have to turn on some reports and "Paper topic" and prepare for the International cultual program.
I can't do it(;~;)
Tommorow I have a supplementary lecture. And more, we will take a test in the lecture.

RECOMEND YOU!!!!!!

This is apple pie a la mode.
I often recommend it to try to it customer.
Because it is very delicious!!
I like it.

So I and Naomi who is a friend since I was a high school student go to my part time job's cafe as customers.


We ate pita sand.
That is very big so a girl couldn't eat it as a one lunch.
But it is so cheap.
Pita sand has 2 version.
One of them, it including, fresh and crisp lettuce and a slice of salmon and cheddar cheese.
Other one is including lettuce and potato salad and some shrimp.

And after eating that, we eat APPLE PIE A LA MODE!!
Of course it is delicious too.
Today is very hot day.
Apple pie a la mode is usual apple pie add original apple ice cream with pie source.

We enjoyed eating and talking. I and Naomi could talk a lot of things.We had a good time.

Portfolio

Writing IIIc: Portfolio
1.0. Essays

1.1. Catalog	Titles of posts with links	Dates (yyyy.mm.dd)	Numbers of words	Numbers of comments
Example	Restaurant: Star of India	2007.03.13	185	1
1st (introduction) April (150+ 2)	Introduction	2007.04.11	152	0
2nd (campus life) May (200+19 words)	Essay2☆Campus Life	2007.05.28	19	0
3rd (your choice) June 5 (250+30 words)	Eaay3 ☆My home town	2007.05.28	280	3
4th (Kumamoto) June 18 (250+9 words)	Kumamoto in Japan	2007.06.28	259	2
5th (review 1) July 2 (175+20 words)	Restaurant-Review☆CIB	2007.06.27	195	1
6th (review 2) July 16 (200+ words)	Movie review☆Nadasousou	2007.07.09	231	2
---	---	TOTALS:		9

Note: Calculate totals without the example.

1.2. Selection and assessment: Which of those essays do you feel is the best, and why? Please remember that a complete answer is better than a short answer, and give at least two reasons.

• ...My hometown. I think I could express my feelings to my hometown.
  

2.0. Comments

---	Titles of posts with links	Dates of comments (yyyy.mm.dd)	Numbers of words in comments	Qualities of comments*
2.1. Your first comment on your instructor's blog	http://writingstudioblog.blogspot.com/2007/03/cherry-blossoms-ichifusa-reservoir.html	2007.03.31	16	not so good
2.2. Your best comment on a classmate's blog	No title	2007.05.08	17	good
2.3. Best comment by a classmate on your blog	He is Cute!!	2007.06.20	29	good
2.4. Most comments on:	Titles of posts with links	Dates of comments (yyyy.mm.dd)	Numbers of words in comments	Qualities of comments*
2.4.1. Any one of your essays	Essay 3☆ my home town	2007.5.28	3 comments	wonderful
2.4.1.1. When did you respond to those comments?	---	2007.6.6	---	---
2.4.1.2. How did you respond to those comments?	---	---	2	I responded each of them on my same post.
2.4.2. Any of your other posts	Apple PIE	2007.6.3	4	I responded each of them on the same post.
2.4.2.1. When did you respond to those comments?	---	2007.6.6	---	---
2.4.2.2. How did you respond to those comments?	---	---	2007.6.6	I responded each of them on the same post.

* Please list the most important qualities of comments on each type of blog post.

2.5. Additional reflections on comments:

• ...I'm very glad to read comments and I will be able to write comments to other blogs as they like.
  

3.0. Typing Speed Trials (5 mins.)

---	Numbers of words	Dates (yyyy.mm.dd)
3.1. Worst typing speed trial	59	2007.06.13
3.2. Best typing speed trial	108	2007.07.21
3.3. Average speed for three (3) most recent speed trials	97	2007.07.11

4.0. Book Reviews

4.1. Catalog	Titles of posts with links	Dates (yyyy.mm.dd)	Number of words	Numbers of comments
Example:	Vampire Killer	2007.05.16	39	1
1-01	ANITA'S BIG DAY	2007.05.01	79	0
1-02	SCOOBY-DOO	2007.05.16	32	1
1-03	Rose Raye, CRIME REPORTER	2007.05.28	66	0
1-04	Ricky Martin	2007.05.28	46	0
1-05	Marcel goes to HOLLY WOOD	2007.05.28	67	0
1-06	Party Fun	2007.06.06	47	0
1-07	JOHNNY ENGLISH	2007.06.11	46	0
1-08	THE AMAZON RAIN FOREST	2007.06.11	52	0
1-09	Freckles	2007.06.11	84	0
1-10	GIRL meets BOY	2007.06.29	44	1
1-11	Flying Home	2007.07.10	90	0
1-12	The Purse	2007.07.10	45	0
1-13	THE HOUSE OF THE SEVEN GABLES	2007.07.10	53	0
---	---	TOTALS:	13	3

Note: Calculate totals without the example.

4.2. Selection and assessment: Which of those book reviews do you feel is the best, and why? Please remember that a complete answer is better than a short answer, and give at least two reasons.

• ...Flying Home is the best. Because it is easily to write more words.
  

5.0. Blog Layout, Labeling, Linking & Media Presentation

---	Yes	No
5.1. Does your blog have an archive in the sidebar?	Y
5.1.1. Does the archive display the titles of posts?	Y
5.1.2. Is the archive organized by week?	Y
5.1.3. Is the archive at the top of the sidebar?	Y
5.2. Does your blog have labels displayed in sidebar?	Y
5.2.1. Do your labels include each of these required labels (typed accurately):	---	---
"books" (plural)	Y
"essays" (plural)	Y
"quickposts" (plural, with no spaces)	Y
5.2.2. Does your sidebar display other labels?	Y
How many other labels have you attached to three (3) or more posts? ... 7 posts	---	---
Which labels, and how many posts each? kgks (1) kumamoto (7) media (1) movies (5) other media (1) photos (5) typing (9)	---	---
5.3. Links & media	---	---
5.3.1. Does your blog include pictures?	Y
Does your blog profile include a picture or graphic representation?		N
How many of your blog posts include pictures or other graphics? ...	---	---
5.3.2. Posts with multiple links	---	---
How many of your posts include three (3) or more links? ...	---	---
5.3.3. Does your blog include other media?		N
How many of your blog posts include other media? ...	---	---

5.4. What would you most like to do to enhance the overall presentation of your blog?

• ...
  

6.0. Additional reflections on your blog writing:

• ...I want to write more words next semester. And I will do my best to express my feelings.
  

7.0. Suggestions for your peers and successors:
...

G-mail

These days I started to use g-mail in the English class. I haven’t used this like, that is able to use chat or mailing to someone. I am not good at using computer. But I have to use it!!

It’s difficult for me to write or paste some pictures for the first time. But I enjoyed using g-mail lately. I write more and more I know how I can do in g-mail.

For example, I can paste nice picture. I can write some English sentences.

Especially I’m glad to receive comments by someone. I enjoy reading those comments.

And I receive comments to someone.

(104 words)

Book Review 13☆THE HOUSE OF THE SEVEN GABLES

I read this book. It is the mistery around the house of the seven gables. This heroine is not so beautiful and is liked by people who lives in same town.
She is so sad.
But a person appeared to help her.
She changed to beoame happy.

That storyis also including love story.

Book Review 12☆The Purse

This is the story about 2 young people.
It's easier to read because it is including some pictures.
I enjoy reading that story.
They worried both of them about partner.
But they are heading for original solution.
And I want to read more this series.

Book Review 11☆FLYING HOME

I read this book. This is the story if a bird. He feeds kindly by the master and his family. He is happy, but he wants to back to home again. Becasue he wants to meet his family.

A chance he can escape from his cage is coming, he escapes no hesitation. He flies over the sea and heading for his hometown amazon to see his family soon.
And he can reach with helping by a other bird whose name is Aka.
I'm happy that he could go back home.

菅原道真

I finished writing about Mitizane Sugawara who was a famous in era of Heian in Japan.
I have to write 4 papers.
I'm very happy to be able to finish writing on the time.
But this week, we have some tests and papers to turn on professors.
I must do my best about study and part time job(;^;)

ESSAY6☆Nadasousou

This is the story about confidence of siblings-in-law.

This movie appears the most famous and popular actors Satoshi Thsmabuki and Masami Nagasawa.

Yoziro always cheer and keep an eye on Kaoru.

They ask us who is your important person.

It is sader story than love story. It is made by the song name's 'Nadasousou'. That song is familiared with over the generation in Japan.

It is a tiny story that Yoziro and Kaoru siblings-in-law.

They couldn't live together so long time, they are so happy.

The life is filling with many smile and they are caring each other.

Youziro gave Kaoru a big big love!

He followed her with love because he and his mother who is already dead had promised 'Follow her whatever will happen to you.'
He stood by the day he died.
Kaoru could go college because Yoziro works all the day long.
And she worries whether his brother is really happy life.
He doesn't think how his life will do better. He thinks only Kaoru's life. Because he is very nice person. He is a good-natured.
But he is happy. Becasue he stays with Kaoru. They are like real siblings.

It is a love between siblings.
I think my brother who lives far away from my house. Can I do for my brother? Is he happy now?I want to help him when he is in trouble.

(231 words)

Teacher

This English writing class’s teacher is Paul. He is very kind to us. Sometimes he send me g-mail whose content is what I couldn’t do last class. He tells me what I have to do for next class. I thought he looks like very strict at the first time. But in fact he is very kind and funny. I like his class. I will do my best in the class so that he doesn’t have to send me g-mail.

(79 words)

My mobire...pho.n..e...

Today I lost my mobile phone.
I use it since I'm a second grade in high school student.
I'm very blue now.
But I'm wondering if buying the old one to new one this time.

First job

I worked new part-time, where is like a Cafe.


There faces main street in Kumamoto prefecture.


We recommend apple pie and carry.


I'm a bit tired, because yesterday I participated the wonderful live.


I want to memorize more detailed rules.

KREVA

I went to KREVA's Live with Ayano. Kreva is a Japanese famous singer and he is also a singer song writer. He is nice guy!!

I like him. I like his appearance. But sounds that he made is also very good and sweet too.　He is distinguished Japanese Hip-hop singer.

We excited to see real Kreva and listen to real sounds.

He was in same place with us. We enjoyed with him.

He entertained us by his dancing and singing songs including new songs.

If I had a chance I want to go his live again♪